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Unity Progress is gradually being made in the fight against cancer. In the early 1900s, few cancer patients had any hopes of long-term survival. In the 1930s, less than one in five cancer victims lived more than five years. In the 1950s, the ratio was one in four, and in the 1960s, it was one in three. Currently, four of ten patients who get cancer this year will be alive five years from now. The gain from one in four to four in ten represents about 69,ooo lives saved each year. Progress is gradually being made in the fight against cancer. In the early 1900s, few cancer patients had any hopes of long-term survival. But because of advances in medical technology, progress has been made so that currently four in ten cancer patients survive. It has been proven that smoking is a direct cause of lung cancer. However, the battle has not yet been won. Although cures for some forms of cancer have been discovered, other forms of cancer are still increasing. Heart disease is also increasing. coherence Sample 1. If your objective is to score a goal, you must kick the ball. The ball may not go where you aim because of a missed kick or an interception by an opponent. But if you continue to run after the ball, then the ball will eventually get nearer to your target. You may need more training or the help of team members to score a goal. Sample 2: You can make a lot of money selling door-to-door if you have the right personality. A person can’t get easily discouraged or he or she will have little success. If one is determined and willing to be rejected, you can do quite well. People who make money realize that rejection is a big part of one’s life as a salesperson. Transitional expressions to add ideas together: and, also, besides, furthermore, in addition, moreover, too, first, second, finally to show emphasis and clarity above all, after all, in fact, particularly, that is, to show similarity like, likewise, in the same manner, in the same way, similarl