精选高考英语写作专题之书信写作(对比类).ppt

Dear Alice, You said that you wanted to know something about quality-oriented education. So I will talk about quality-oriented and exam-oriented education. At last , we only could listen our teachers and make notes. After classes we had a lot homeworks to do. It took us much time on it at night. But now, in class, we can discuss questions with teacher. Students are all like to study. Sometime we also could play a teacher. We don’t have so many homeworks. So we have enough time to do all kinds of activities, for example, singing, playing balls, English coner, and so on. At night , we can see news, do experiments… Yours, Li Hua 2007, 2, 20 Common problems: Incorrect letter form; Spelling mistakes; Grammatical mistakes; The passage is wordy; Think in Chinese and write in Chinglish; No effective conjunctions Spelling mistakes: Our school life was quite boiling. We only made notices and lessoned in class. But now things are difficult from it. Grammatical mistakes In class, exam-oriented education made us to listen the teachers and make notes Comparing with that, quality-oriented education allows us learn lively. We just had too many homeworks to do. Several years ago, we have saw and experienced the exam-oriented education. The passage is wordy Write in Chinglish No effective conjunctions Feb 20, 2007 Dear Alice, How nice to hear from you. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? Now, I will tell you about it. In the past, exam-oriented education forced us to listen to our teacher while taking notes in class. After class, we did all kinds of exercises without end. After supper, we had to continue our exercises far into the night. Now, quality-oriented education has made our school life colorful. We are active in class. In order to train the ability,