初中英语作文指导.pdf

第一讲：句子的写作 2. 案例分析 例题：你班进行了一次综合实践活动。通过活动，同学们收获很大，尤其是李华同学进步最快。请你根据 表格内容写一篇关于李华的短文。词数 80 个左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 过去的表现 现在的表现 经常与别人吵架 与别人相处融洽 乱扔垃圾 爱护环境 沉溺于电脑游戏 积极参加各种活动 参考作文对比，注意划线部分。 三类一般作文 一类优秀作文 We are very glad that Li Hua has made We are very glad that Li hua has made great progress. But he used to be impolite and great progress. Before the activity, he often even often quarreled with others. He threw quarreled with other students, and never said litter about and made our classroom dirty . sorry to others. He always threw trash in the After class, he usually lost himself in playing classroom. Sometimes, he played computer computer games. After this activity, Li Hua has games for a very long time. But now, he can changed a lot. He gets on well with others and is make good friends with others. Also, he is very ready to help them. He also takes good care of active in taking part in a lot of activities, such as the environment. He takes an active part in all playing basketball, visiti