写作研讨（姜华）.ppt

* when I was just a little girl I asked my mother what will I be will I be pretty, will I be rich heres what she said to me  when I grew up and fell in love I asked my sweetheart what lies ahead will we have rainbows day after day heres what my sweetheart said now I have children of my own they asked their mother what will I be will I be handsome, will I be rich I tell them tenderly que sera, sera whatever will be, will be the futures not ours to see que sera, sera what will be, will  姜 华 执 教： My dream job Writing: ★What jobs do you know? ★What should we mention(提及) if we want to talk about the dream job? ★Do you have a dream job? where why what how job What will you be? Possible answers: I’ll be a teacher. I’m going to be an engineer. I want to be an actor.… Why will you be a teacher/a doctor/an actor/…? Possible answers: Because I love children and I’m good at English. Because… How will you be a teacher/a doctor/an actor/…? Possible answers: I will study English well and get on well with kids. I will… Where will you work? Possible answers: I’ll work in Shanghai. … I’ll work at school. … A: What are you going to be when you grow up? B: When I grow up, I’m doing to be a… A: Why are you going to be a… ? B: Because…… A: How are you going to be a… ? B: I must …… A: Where are you going to work? B: I’m going to work….. I will be a teacher at school in Shanghai. Because I love children and I’m good at English. So I’ll study English well and get on well with kids from now on. I think I’ll be a teacher after I finish my college. Other writings: My future; My dream; My dream job 一、审题—抓准信息，快速判断 1. 体裁 2. 人称 3. 时态 4. 谋篇 二、成篇—衔接过渡，连句成篇 根据给出的要点提示和句与句之间的关系，使用适当的过渡词句。同时要注意所给的先后顺序进行写作。 *