中考英语作文专题复习 旅游日记.ppt

English Writing ---travel diary ? ? 谈论过去的事： 写旅游日记 ? ? 一般过去时 ： 1. 过去的状态：主语 +was/were+… 2. 过去的动作：主语 +V .ed ? ? How to write a travel diary? ? ? 审：审题 （人称、主要内容、时态） 列：列出各要点 , 写出关键词 / 词组 连：词 / 词组 - 句 - 段 - 篇 （开头、结尾、连接词） 查：检查人称，时态，拼写，短语和要点 誊：誊写作文，书面整洁 五 步 法 审、列、连、查、誊 ? ? Opening sentences 开头 1 Last Sunday, I went to …with… 2.On May1st, we traveled to … 3.On Children s Day , we had a chance to go to… ? ? Summary 结尾 1.To make a summary 进行总结 2.Eg. What a wonderful place! 3. I think we had a great time there. 4. Although we were a little tired, we were very happy. 5.2.To show wishes 表达愿望 6.Eg. I wish I can go there again if I have a chance. 7. For your next vacation, why not consider visiting … ? ? Conjunctions 润滑剂（连接词、过渡词） 表顺序 表递进 表并列、选择 表转折 表原因 first/then/next/finally also/besides/even/what s more and/or… but/however/although because ? ? 第二学月作文： 请你以“ A Visit to the zoo ”为题，根据提示用英语写一篇短 文。 提示内容： 1 ．那天天气 晴朗 ，阳光 灿烂 。 2 ．动物园 离 我们学校 有点远 ，我们 乘 公共汽 车去 那儿。 3 ．动物园 人多 ，很 挤 。 4 ．我们参观了游客中心， 看 了海豚 表演 ， 海豚聪明可爱，我 非常喜欢 他们。 5 ．我们去礼品店买了很多礼物， 到 下午五点 才 返校。 ? ? A visit to the zoo Last Sunday I went to the zoo with my classmates.The weather was fine and it was sunny all day.The zoo is far from my school, so we took a bus there .(We went there by bus.) There were many people in the zoo.It was very crowded. At frist ,we visited the Visitors Center. Then we watched a dolphin show, and it was very interesting.Dolphins are very cute and I like them very much. After that ,we went to the Gift Shop and bought lots of gifts. Finally ,we were tired but happy.We didn t go back to school until five o clock. It was an exciting trip.I hope to go there again. ? ? 1 、看语法是否正确，包括单词的拼写，大小 写，标点，动词的时态、语态，名词的单复数，