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实用文案 实用文案 标准文档 标准文档 “读写任务式作文”写作训练 Focus: 30 词的摘要怎么写？ (限时训练十五作文)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇 150词左右的英语短文。 As we all know, the “ (passe nger) tran sport duri ng the Spring Festival period ” has bee n a hot phrase all through the China land. The volume of passenger traffic(客运量)reaches its climax before and after the Spring Festival. Especially, the number of those who decide to go back to their hometown by train is increasing rapidly, so it promotes the short of the tickets of passenger train. Luckily, the Ministry of Railways( 铁道咅B) has come up with solutions. For instanee, it arranges extra trains duri ng the peak time for passe nger tran sport as well as ope ns 24-hour ticket sales win dows for passe ngers in order to ease the traffic pressure. Moreover, it helps to deliver train tickets to the doorsteps, providi ng convenience for passe ngers. One thing that has to be mentioned this year is about start of selling tickets on-line this year. For one thing, it to some degree shortens the time of purchasing tickets. However, most of the passe ngers are migra nt workers returni ng home for Spring Festival. They are not familiar with the process of buying tickets and as a result cannot buy the tickets on time. What is worse, many computers selli ng tickets broke dow n un der too much pressure of operati on. Therefore, many people blame such a method in that it doesn t suit nowadays situation. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。 【忌照抄原句！忌添加自己观点！ 30词左右！】 以约120个词对“春运”进一步叙写，内容包括： (1 )自己亲身经历或者听闻的一次火车春运的状况； 【第一人称，过去时】 “网上售票”引起人们不满的原因； 【乘客主体是农民工，不懂购票；系统本身不够先进。 其实这两点可以从阅读材料中找到，但是必须用不同方式来表达】 给铁道部或者农民工提出解决“网上购票”问题的合理化建议。【针对上一段提出的两方面问 题来写】 ［写作要求］ 作文中可以使用亲身经历或者虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文 中的句子； 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 ［评分标准］ 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语句连贯。 【请你练习】划出每段关键词；替换成不同表达方式；关键词： tran sport during the Spring Festival period ”，solutions , selling tickets on-Iine , However, passengers , blame 范文： Although it is as crowded as usual during the “ transport during the Spring Festival period ” ， many solutions have been raised.