2012年高考浙江卷作文--谚语习语.ppt

俗话说：早起的鸟儿有虫吃。请根据你生活中亲身经历的一件事，说明一切成功源于凡事早做规划，不断追求，辛勤劳作。根据上面中文提示写一篇100-120词左右的短文。 大家的普遍的错误 拼写错误多。 句子主要成份不全。 句子主谓不一致。 谓语时态混乱。 用词不当。 句型误用汉语式的句子。 earily， planing， untill, luckly, studing, extremly, slience, succeed/success/successful… exercise (practise) ; head (mind); grades ( scores/marks) I remembered, in my childhood, it happend a don’t make me forgot the thing, it is I remembered clearly. 尤其要注意拼写方面的错误。 分清大小写 减少书写笔误 不会写的单词不要随意处理 正确使用英文标点符号 多读多背，使尽可能多的地道英语句子在脑海中刻下深深的烙印。 审题不清！！ 审题： １．仔细阅读提纲，以免跑题． ２．段落明确，最好三段，最多四段． 开头段提出谚语，简单解释它． 二段或二、三段举例阐释。 末段重申、总结、或提出希望。 人称： 第三人称，第一人称 时态： 一般现在时，一般过去时 段落： 三段 para1: 谚语及谚语的基本含义; para2: 你的亲身经历 para3: 你对谚语的理解 第一段，引出谚语 As the famous saying goes, … There is a famous saying “----”, which means ----. The well-known proverb---------has long been accepted by all of us. It tells us that---- It is well-known to everyone that __________(引出谚语). This self-evident proverb means ________(给出解释). When we talk of the famous proverb----, we should not simply label it as right or wrong, but explore it in depth. It is well-known to everyone that ‘Practice Makes Perfect’. This self-evident proverb means doing something repeatedly is the only way to become expert on it. The famous proverb that “haste makes waste ”is very philosophical and widely accepted. It means the more we hurry, the more likely we are to make errors or even result in a complete failure. When we talk of the famous proverb Silence is Gold, we should not simply label it as right or wrong, but explore it in depth. 第二段，联系实践或自身经历 Let’s take --- as an example---. A case in point is----- Another good case in point is --- When it comes to---,it is also the case. Many examples can be used to prove the proverb.  Learning a foreign language like English is a case in point. Ａ good case in point is writing researc