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写作技能培优 第二招 第二招　怎样跳出“大众分”——词汇要“美”，妙语要“多” 大众化的词汇、平庸的表达会使长时间工作的阅卷教师产生视觉疲劳。如果一篇作文中出现几个与众不同的靓词佳句，老师给分也绝不会吝啬！ 一、增加靓词的“出镜率”，吸引阅卷老师的眼球 很多考生作文裹足不前的一个重要原因是反复用初中学过的“第一反应词”，背了大量的靓词妙语而不用。(建议大家在想到一个表达时，务必要想一想还有没有更好的表达方式)，这就是我们平时常讲的“头脑风暴法”，例如想表达“美丽的”这个含义，大家首先想到的是“beautiful”，那么在下笔时，要想一想还有没有更出彩的表达，如“attractive”或“charming”等。再如表达“困难的”时，大家常用“difficult”，那是不是用“tough”或“challenging”更与众不同呢？ 二、巧用4招，实现由低级向高级的转化 1．“语”众不同，避免人云亦云 写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。 ① (2015·高考安徽卷·书面表达)I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is so interesting as I have read. →I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. ②(2015·高考陕西卷·书面表达)Successfully，I have helped her in several English activities of my class，which has been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates. →Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which has been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates. ③(2015·高考湖北卷·短文写作)From this experience I have learnt that questioning can help us to seek the truth. →From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth. 2．更新换代，避免重复 写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。 ①(2015·高考浙江卷·书面表达)We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have different ways to deal with such a situation. →We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. ②We’ve built a new experiment building beside the old one and we’ve also built a library where the old playground used to be. →We’ve built a new experiment building beside the old one and we’ve also set up a library where the old playground used to be. 3．单词与短语巧妙互用 一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。 ①(2015·高考江苏卷·书面表达)Quite a few things caused the traffic problem. →Quite a few things gave rise to the traffic problem. ②(2015·高考福建卷·书面表达)We should try to improve