短文改错课件.ppt

How to do Proof-reading by Angela Zhang 张 Arrivals Caution! Slippery. Mind your head！ How to do Proof-reading by Angela Zhang 张 Watch the micro class and fill in the blanks on your paper 张 动词形， 名词数． 还要注意形和副． 代词格，细领悟 介词短语须关注． 习惯用法要记住． 冠词连词常光顾． A Limerick 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 本可以得到9分！ 本可以多得8分！ 本可以多得3分！ 真题体验 When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that sglobal warming has already become a very seriously problem . The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so，we’ll live to regret it. (2015·全国Ⅰ） Four points that you should pay attention to 　①标点符号不改. 　②大小写不改. 　③词序错误不改. 　④在纲外生词不改(带汉语注释的词). Thank you ！ 张