2024届浙江强基联盟5月份高三全国“优创名校”联考读后续写--Kathy帮助从小怕水的我通过了游泳测试 讲义素材.docxVIP

一读后续写原题目呈现：

Iwasalwaysafraidofwater.Thisfearcouldnotbeexplained,butIknewthatthemomentIsteppednearanybodyofwater,mylegswouldturntojelly(果冻).Iwouldimaginemyselfdrowninginthewaterandthrashingaround(乱扑腾)helplessly.ThatwaswhyIhadnevergoneintoaswimmingpooluntilswimmingbecameaschoolrequirement.Myschoolwantedallpupilstopassaswimmingtest,andiftheycouldnot,thentheywouldhavetoattendweeklyswimminglessonsinschool,whichmademetremble.

Thus,myparentssignedmeupforswimminglessonsatthepoolnearmyhouse.Withgreatunwillingness,Iattendedthoseweeklylessons,andeachonewasgreatsufferingforme.Iwasnaturallyclumsy,andmyfearofwaterdidnothelpatall.Everylesson,Iwouldbespendingmytimethrashingaboutinthewater,whilemyclassmateswouldbeswimmingcountlesslapseffortlesslyandeventurningoverlikedolphinsinthewater.HowwasIgoingtopassthetestatthisrate?Inmyswimmingclass,therewasanexceptionallyathleticgirl.Tallandmuscular,hernamewasKathy.Shewasthebestswimmerinourclassandalwayslookedatmewithdisdain(鄙视),especiallywhenIthrashedabouthopelesslyinthewater.

Once,afteraparticularlylongandhardswimminglesson,IspottedKathyswimminggracefullyinthepool.Gatheringmycourage,Iaskedgently,Kathy,canyouteachmetoswim?Shestaredatmecoldly.ItwasasifIstoodattheedgeofanendlessoceanofinadequacy,myfearsappearinglikedarkstormcloudsthreateningtodrownme.

Yet,inthatmoment,aglimmerofhopeflashedwithinme,adesperatelongingforguidanceandacceptance.WouldKathysicyexterior(外表)meltunderthewarmthofempathy,orwouldIremainforeverthrashingintheseaofmyownfears?

二中文意思：

我一直害怕水。这种恐惧无法解释，但我知道，只要我走近任何水域，我的腿就会软得像果冻一样。我会想象自己在水中溺水，并无助地挣扎。这就是为什么我从未进过游泳池，直到游泳成为学校的必修课程。我的学校希望所有学生都能通过游泳测试，如果他们不能，就必须在学校参加每周一次的游泳课程，这让我颤抖。

因此，我的父母为我报了一个靠近家的游泳课程。我非常不情愿地参加了那些每周一次的课程，每一次