写作2第五次作业指导.doc

写作2第五次作业指导 请看以下样例（严禁抄袭该样例） Sample 1: Writing (2) Assignment 04- Analyses Course: Writing (2) Unit: 5 Assignment code: 05 Assignment title: The Control of Electronic Communication Student: Gao Hong Study center: Beijing TC Class: 2001(Autumn)- DP Notice: You can use the following model assignment for reference, but you are forbidden to copy it in whole or in part, otherwise you will get ZERO for this assignment. All assignments should be written in your own words. 您可以参考此次作业的教师评判，但是严禁任何形式的抄袭。一经发现，此次作业将被判为零分。 ? The Control of Electronic Communication ? Through the years, electronic communication has become increasingly important in our lives. It has become our most important and widely shared form of entertainment, especially for children.When we log on (-to) the internet we can see more and more advertising. Net advertising is on the increase, making its influence continually more dangerous ( "problematic" is better) . In order to obtain more profit (OK, but "increase their profits" [usually plural] is better) ,some of (delete) companies' advertising contain (contains; advertising is singular; "presents" would be better) unrealistic situations. They present fast-paced, colorful lies. Due to (the fact that: the object of a preposition must be a noun, pronoun or gerund, not just a clause) children has (have) no analytic skill (plural) , they usually are attracted by colorful lies. Some of (delete) advertisings (advertising is uncountable]) are (singular) "swampland" (What does this mean?) . Such as, (delete) these (again, advertising is uncountable, and there is no real reason to use this/these here; there is no "those" to contrast it with.) net advertising instill (singular) the wrong values in our children (such as) unhealthy competition and (also) let (singular) you (them) easily log on (-to) porn web site (plural) . Because children are extremely impressionable, they are strongly influenced by what they see on