我的讲课---作文.pptVIP

Learning aim: Introduce the steps to write a composition. Lead the students to write a compostion following the steps Revision 我要强调的是自信在我们的成功中起着重要的作用。 我不仅学会了要欣赏自己而且还要同情别人。 不管未来遇到多么大的困难，我们都应该尽力去克服。 不管你进行哪种运动，你都可以通过用环保设备或购买回收材料制品来使它变得更环保。 高考英语作文评分标准 第五档(很好)；(25-30分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致,具备较强的语言运用能力。 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 Step1 Decide on the structure Step2 Do your brainstorming about the topic What can we do to protect the Earth? (Group work) My suggestions 1 save water, electricity, paper. 2 walk intead of driving 3 plant trees 4 avoid using plastic bags 5 buy product made by recycled material. 6 protect animals to keep natural balance Step3 Pay attention to linking words Step4 Polish your article with words and sentence patterns of high level Words Sentence pattern Useful patterns to help you What we should do is … We should make it our duty to… It is generally believed that… … as a result of which… It is high time that we should… Only when we… can we… It is …that/who… (强调句) To…, we’d better… Step5 Correct mistakes 1.Liu Jiajia is a girl who study in Xin Hua middle school. 2.But she also treat the life active and optimistic. 3.They were try their best to help you. 4. Help her out is our duty. 5.Last week, my teacher told us that there is a nice girl in our school. Time for appreciation Share your letter. Show your star sentences Summary Step1 Decide on the structure Step2 Do your brainstorming about the topic Step3 Pay attention to linking words Step4 Polish your article Step5 Correct mistakes Handwriting Homework 假如你是地球，人类对你的过度开发和破坏使你现在对自己和人类的未来感到担忧。请给人类写一封信表示你