精品我修改过的读写义务作文方法.ppt

读写任务型写作模板 标题 第一部分: 第二部分: 标题(按要求) 标题是段落中心思想的精练表达形式。根据所写短文的内容，概括出中心思想然后加以提炼，拟定标题； Students’ Mistakes Should Be Corrected By Their Teachers We Need Teachers’ Help Should We Judge by Ourselves? 第一段：概括所给短文内容要点 注意：利用原文中所给的语言材料，用自己的话来写；概括后的文章意思要通顺，行文要连贯。 写作具体方法和要求: 第一段概括要做到开门见山: 例如: According to the passage, we know… This article is mainly about… The writer/author states that… Some people think… 2. 第一段概括要抓住要点,语言精练: 第二段:过渡词引出主题句---自己的观点---理由 开头用语： I do agree with the author… In some way, I agree with …, but… This opinion sounds right but is hardly practical. It is definitely not like that. As a matter of fact, … From my personal angle alone… In my opinion,… From my personal point of view… As far as I’m concerned… … 第三段[最后一段] : 总结句开头用语： In conclusion,… In short,… To make a long story short,… In general,… In a word,… In brief,… On the whole,… All in all,… … Examples: 1) All in all, the development of children is not only the responsibility of their parents, but also the responsibility of the whole society. 2) In a word, smoking harms yourselves as well as your neighbors, so it should be strictly forbidden. 3) In conclusion, we value money but can’t put money above everything else. 读写任务 阅读下面的短文， 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 Let children learn to judge their own work. A child learning to talk doesn’t learn by being corrected all the time; if corrected too much, he will stop talking. He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others’ language. Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other people’s. In the same way, children learn to do all the other things. They learn to talk, run, climb, ride a bicycle by comparing their own behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes. But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistakes for himself, even fewer chances for him to correct himself. They do it all for him. Teachers act a