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2012年考研英语全攻略之写作 第一部分：总论 一。 要求 1. 很好地完成了试题规定的任务：包含所有内容要点；使用丰富的语法结构和词汇；语言自然流畅，语法错误极少；有效地采用了多种衔接手段，文字连贯，层次清晰。字数：160200词。 2. 段落数：一般为三段。 3. 评分标准：总体评分法，分档记分。 2017分：内容切题，包括题中所列各项要求；清楚表达其内涵，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。 1613分：内容切题，包括题中所列各项内容；比较清楚表达其内涵，文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词错误较少。文章长度符合要求。 129分：内容切题，基本包括题中所列各项要求；基本清楚表达其内涵；句子结构和用词有一些错误。文章长度符合要求。 85分： 内容基本切题，基本包括题中所列各项要求；语句可以理解，但有较多的句子结构和用词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。 41分： 基本按要求写作，但只有少数句子可以理解。 0分： 文不对题，语句混乱，无法理解。 4. 评分要实事求是，严肃认真，不可不加区别地只给中间一两种分数。避免集中趋势。 5. 例：2003年作文判例 Study the set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should 1） describe the set of drawings， interpret its meaning， and 2） point out its implications in our life. Example 1 It goes without saying that the drawings aim at revealing a common and serious problem in China： how to educate and cultivate the young. Lets take a closer look at the drawings. In an ideal condition， the flower blooms. But when moved out of the green house， it perishes under the rain and storm. It is obvious that the flower in greenhouse cant withstand wind and rains. Nowadays the young generation in China， like the flower in the greenhouse， live under the full protection from their parents. Parents want to show all their love to their children. They give their children all the best things they can afford and do not let their children do anything at home. Self-centeredness and arbitrariness have become a trait of the young generation. Once leaving their parents， many young people cannot make a living of their own. They get lost when stepping into the complex reality and cannot face any hardships and difficulties. Children education has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by education experts， but also by people in all walks of life. The failure of children education does more harm to the development of our society and our civilization than to children themselves. Thus， its high time that par