初三书面表达指导.ppt

连 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。 (一) 段落写作，达到各个段落的统一、完整和连贯性。 (二) 段落间的衔接过渡。 改 选好词句，修改文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。 * ? What do you think of the problem? ? Think of the problem It’s serious problem because it does harm to our health. It’s common for students to have difficulties in sleeping, and this does harm to our health. One is that we have a wrong diet. The other is that we fail to reduce our pressure. Too much fried food and too many sweets are not only bad for our teeth but also make us fat. Students don’t take as much exercise as before. Students are eating junk food in place of vegetables and fruit. It is the huge pressure that brings you many difficulties. We’re too busy to do sports. The reason of the increasing weight is our bad behavior in health such as eating junk food, staying still in front of TV and so on. How can we solve the problem? Health diet sports relax Give advice You should / shouldn’t .. Why don’t you … Why not … It’s a good idea to … How about … Try (not) to … Diet Don’t eat too much junk food, it makes you put on weight ___________becoming less healthy. It’s essential to eat fruit and vegetables _________junk food. A healthy diet can _________________________people’s health. Try to eat more fruit and vegetables _________junk food. A bad diet might lead you t make a real difference to you, ______a bad diet might lead you into trouble. _____________to eat more vegetable s and fruit. Solve the problem as well as in stead of make a real difference to rather than It’s better while Sports Do sports regularly ____________put on weight. It’s a good idea to take some outdoor sports ___________jogging and playing basketball. Choose the sports you like best______ you won’t feel bored. It’s a great way to do some sports_________eating less food. in order not to including so that instead of Relax