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大学英语四级考试优秀范文 Part?1:2010?年?12?月 1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2.为了让孩子独立，父母应该…… How?Should?Parents?Help?Children?to?Be?Independent ①It?is?beyond?reproach?that?children?are?always?considered?the?apple?of?parents” eyes?,which?is?especially?true?in?single-child?families.?②However?,many?parents?go so?far?as?to take?over?everything?for?their?life?and?study?even?to?their?future. ③It?is?not?unusual?to?witness?that?an?increasing?number?of?children?are?accompanied?by parent?on?their?first?day?in?college.?④I?declare?in?no?uncertain?terms?that?it?will?end?up?with?the children”?s?lack?of?independence?.In?such?a?world?full?of?fierce?competition?,being?independent becomes?essential?for?a?would-be?success?.Thus?,⑤what?should?parents?do?? In?my?humble?opinion,?⑥on?the?one?hand?,parents?should?raise?children?in?a?free-ranging way?instead?of?being?“helicopter”?parents,?who?always?seem?to?hover?over?their?children;?⑦?on the?other?hand?,parents?should?teach?children?to?be?responsible?for?their?own?behaviors?instead?of monopolizing?everything?.?⑧I?cling?to?the?belief?that?only?when?parents?realize?what?is?better?for their?children?and?care?them?in?a?right?way?,can?they?help?children?develop?independence. 精彩点评：①引入话题：孩子是父母的掌上明珠。②自然过渡：但是，有些父母却为孩子包 办一切。③引用生活中的实例，证实父母为孩子包办并非空穴来风。④分析包办所带来的后 果。⑤提出问题：父母应该如何做？⑥和⑦具体阐述解决问题的策略，层次分明。⑧简要总 结前文所提的具体侧咧，是文章结尾不显突兀。 加分亮点：beyond?reproach?无可非议 be?accompanied?by…有……陪同 declare?in?no?uncertain?terms?毫不讳言 fierce?competition?激烈的竞争 essential?至关重要的 cling?to?the?belief?坚信 Part?2:2010?年?6?月 1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2.出现这种现象的原因是…… 3.为了改变这种状况，我认为…… Due?Attention?Should?Be?Given?to?Spelling Nowadays,①?an?increasing?number?of?students?seem?to?attach?less?importance?to?spelling?in English?learning?.②Thus?,numerous?misspellings?appear?in?their?papers,?③and?what?”s?worse?,?a well-organized?essay?is?therefore?totally?impossible. ④There?are?various?reasons?responsible?for?this?embarrassing?situation.?⑤For?on?thing?,much more?students?give?priorities?to?oral?English?at?the?cost?of?dosing?less?sp