unitwildlifeprotectionwriting写作保护动物.pptxVIP

写作专题突破;【审题谋篇】 第一自然段为总写：写明写信目的，你的感受(应用一般现在时态)。 第二段：反映你的所见所闻，应用一般过去时态。 第三段：你的建议，应用一般现在时和将来时态。 最后一段：请求该报帮助。 本文应用第一人称；可以用first，second，but，even等词连接或过渡。;【写作要点】 1.我写信是要告诉你上星期天我在动物园的经历。 (1)____________________you about my experience in the zoo last Sunday. (2)Here I write to tell you about________________ in the zoo last Sunday. 答案：(1)I’m writing to tell (2)what I saw;2．有很多动物被养在动物园内，它们好像没有得到很好的对待。 (1)There were many animals________________in the zoo and ________they were not being treated well. (2)Many animals________________and they_____ ___________treated well. (3)______________many animals______________ were not being treated well.;答案：(1)kept；it seemed that (2)were kept in the zoo；seemed not to be (3)It seemed that；kept in the zoo 3．首先要教育人们：动物是我们的朋友。动物对人们生活的重要性。 (1)First we should make people know that_________ ___________and____________________.;(2)__________，we should tell people_____________ animals and that they are our friends. (3)_______________，we should make people know animals are our friends and important to people’s life. 答案：(1)animals are our friends；important to people’s life (2)Firstly；the importance of (3)First of al;4．任何虐待动物的人都要被罚款。 (1)____________________badly should be fined. (2)____________________badly should be fined. (3)____________________badly should be fined. 答案：(1)Anyone who treats animals (2)Whoever treats animals (3)Those who treat animals;5．我建议把动物放回到自然界去。 (1)I suggest that____________________in nature. (2)________________is that these animals should be set free in nature. (3)________________that these animals should be set free in nature. 答案：(1)those animals should be set free (2)My suggestion (3)It is my suggestion;【连句成篇】 ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________;【??作欣赏】 Dear Editor， Here I write to tell you about my exp