（高考英语作文炼句）第6篇译文老师笔记.docx

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1.均衡完善的教育不仅有利于年轻人的职业前景,而且能提升他们的生活满意度.

Awell-balancededucation?(1.均衡完善的教育)notonly?contributesto?(2.有利于)the?careerprospects?(3.职业前景)ofyoungadults,butalsoimprovetheir?lifesatisfaction(4.生活满意度).

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1-well-balancededucation

well此处所取的含义是adv-很好地、充分地”.

?词典释义：

well-balanced

[?welb?l.?ntst]?adjective?

?■containingamixtureofideas,people,etc.with?eachonebeingrepresentedequallyorfairly?平衡的;均衡的??

?a?well-balanced?article结构非常合理的文章

?a?well-balanced?team实力均衡的队伍

■describesagroupoffoodswhichtogether?provideagoodrangeofthethingsyouneedtostayhealthy?营养搭配均衡的

?a?well-balanced?meal/diet营养均衡的一餐／饮食

■describessomeonewhoiscalmandreasonableand?whoshowsgoodjudgment?(人)稳重的;明智的

?Dothesenurseriesproducethehappy,?well-balanced??childrenthatteachersandparentssaytheydo?这些幼儿园是否像那些老师和家长们说的那样能培养出快乐而发展全面的孩子?

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外刊例句：

Inotherwords,everywellbalancededucationshould?includeliteracy,numeracyandcreativelymakingthings.(TheTelegraph)

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替换表达：a/anbalanced/well-rounded/all-roundeducation

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学生错误表达：

(1)abalancedandwell-roundededucation

点评：balanced本身已经有包含well-rounded的含义,这里不用重复用词

(2)equilibriumeducation

点评：equilibrium是指不同的人、团体或势力之间相互竞争的平衡,均衡,不能用来修饰education,建议翻译的时候不要根据中文意思直译,多查查词典寻找合适的表达.

(3)balancedandcomplete/overalleducation

点评：complete/overalleducation表达过于生硬,可以查查词典中education的词条,寻找合适的修饰词.

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2-contributeto

注意contributeto后若跟动词,应是-ing形式.contributeto中性,好坏结果都可以放在其后.

?词典释义：

3.VERB?动词??促成;促使;是导致…的原因之一?Ifsomething?contributes?to?aneventorsituation,itisoneofthecauses?ofit.

??【语法信息】：Vton

??【语法信息】：V-ing

?Thereportsaysdesignfaultsinboththevessels?contributedtothetragedy...报告说两艘船存在的设计缺陷也促成了这场悲剧的发生.??

?Stress,bothhumanandmechanical,mayalsobea?contributingfactor.来自人的和机械方面的压力可能也是一个因素.

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可供替换的表达：benefit/bebeneficialto

?外刊例句：

Ithopesthatgreaterawarenessofthemeritsofpotatoes?will?contributeto?theachievement?ofitsMillenniumDevelopmentGoals,byhelp